I still don't have a title for any of this, much less an idea where it is going. I think that someone has to die and then we have a murder mystery style plot going on, but I really have no idea. Also, I don't really want him to be the main character if I can help it. Him going off and doing a murder mystery plot would be... well, a bit patriarchal, no?
Again some stats for you, courtesy of 750words.com:
Rating: PG-13 - sexual content and violence (still not seeing the violence)
Feeling mostly affectionate and concerned mostly about religion (but only just)
Mindset: Extrovert - Positive - Certain - Feeling
Time: Past; Primary Sense: Touch; Us and them: Them