Back in the saddle again, and not even side-saddle, but a new edit of those first paragraphs of the nano attempt from last year. I'm hoping this will help me get started again. There aren't many huge changes but I hope it's easier to read, has less run on sentences and fewer repeated words.
Analysis is intriguing and is from 750words.com as ever.
Rating: PG-13 (swearing, sexual content[?] and violence[?])
Feeling mostly Affectionate[?], and concerned mostly about Home - intriguing.
Mindset: Extrovert - Negative - Certain - Feeling
Time: The Past; Primary Sense: Hearing; Us and Them: Them
40 minutes at 24 words per minute